Christain, It's obvious you did some research however, you didn't provide any URL's for your information or your images. To draw in your audience you needed more pictures to make it more interesting. Your choice of music was poor. It was so loud it overpowered you actual presentation. Music is to add not take away. You were suppose to get the html coding and post that . . . your YouTube link wasn't working. Next time if you need help with these, ask.
Didn't follow copyright law - 7 Music took away from presentation -5 only two pictures in the entire presentation - 5 Voice - monotone -4
With all of that said . . . you did do a nice job putting it together on Movie Maker and I was at least able to find it on YouTube using the information you provided. 79% C+
Christain, It's obvious you did some research however, you didn't provide any URL's for your information or your images. To draw in your audience you needed more pictures to make it more interesting. Your choice of music was poor. It was so loud it overpowered you actual presentation. Music is to add not take away. You were suppose to get the html coding and post that . . . your YouTube link wasn't working. Next time if you need help with these, ask.
ReplyDeleteDidn't follow copyright law - 7
Music took away from presentation -5
only two pictures in the entire presentation - 5
Voice - monotone -4
With all of that said . . . you did do a nice job putting it together on Movie Maker and I was at least able to find it on YouTube using the information you provided.
79% C+